beatmasterJAG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aktion]

Maybe you'll read this one day?!?!?!!?

I suppose you have long since left this account, and this song is over 2 yrs old....But I happend to play Obversity maybe 2 weeks ago. This song just came into my head now and I couldn't figure out where I heard it or who made it, until I managed to find you on the credits for Obversity. So in a long way about all I really wanted to say is that your song is catchy, and left a print in my memory. Thus, a D/L and a 5....Good luck with whatever you're doing now....

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[Rig - Stardust Backwards]

Ha FUN

It really does seem as tho you just listened to the future rewind the past or the present just happend ago?! "Lets do the time warp"?

Er, yeah it was interesting lol Some stuff backwards just sounds cool.

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

Rig responds:

Backwards rules. Yay!
Thanks for the review!

[SM64 Snow Theme Remix]

Itsa Mario!

Ha, I feel like I just stepped into a polka club. Thats funny.

Some parts sounded a little muffled, prolly coulda mixed those spots better so that volume didnt peak and get grungy.

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

Feel free to listen to my other tracks :]

[Rakuenshugi]

Your learning.

I dont want to feel responsible for this submission. You did all this on your own will. I wouldnt have used the arps, b/c it is a FL demo. Yep I just exposed you. Any FL commoner tho will catch that.

Your gtr solo didnt fit in so well-maybe if you mixed it better it would. I suppose I could teach you how to mix today ?!

I noticed you added a pad which gives it a lil extra touch, but I think you could use more melodies and pattern sequencing to make this song more interesting. And you should work on your transitioning so that you could fit that GTR in better. Also switch up your arp progressions to make things more interesting and not so repetitive. ;]

Keep using FL, the more you do the better you will get :]

JAG

[~returning~]

thump thump

This track got a little muddy.Work on your mixing and EQ so you can get some clear sounding tunes. This song got really busy though, it was a little amusing :]

Cool ideas here. Keep working with FL and learning up on it!

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

bibotheking responds:

thx for the review, and i'll keep it...er...Wildstyle.

[Mice!]

<.< mice?? >.>

Super busy! HAHA

Is this like one of those quick tracks that is ment to be on a DDR and only last a few minutes so the poor kids dont have an early age heart attack on the deck?? :\ ??

Cool idea-now give it direction and it would be even better.

Maybe work on the intro so it really takes off and builds up nice?!

Your friendly SineWeaver,
JAG

[Urban Train - Telenova Mix]

Yep its a go.

Sounds like a great start-go ahead finish it. The song sounds more worthy than a good chunk of other submitters lol

Urban trains eh-wish I lived in a city with them. Not my city tho-its too small-waste of tax money...

Ah, back to the song...I like the piano melody. Then you bring in the "trance" sounding synth to play along with the piano. All the rest is a little basic-which isn't necessarily bad. Good build ups.

When you complete the final version be sure to mix it up better then this one. Doesnt sound perfectly clear and all there yet ;]

Good luck and have fun finishing it!

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Fantasy]

Just one more for ya.

For some reason I thought you left-but then again I dunno. Anyway, nice to see a new submission. Just another track to add to your arsenal of goodies. you get paid for all this yet--who the hell really reads this shit. HAHA Welp, nice trance synths. I actually thought the mid range was a little cluttered, and the drums up more a lil?! :\

Good work. Keep em coming!
One more fan,
JAG

[_-_Destiny Island_-_]

"Toss me aCorona and a lime-no worries today" :]

Very beach-haha. It was a good track. I got a friend who loves this kinda stuff...Imma d/l it.
Improve those mixes and this one would be perfect!

Good work :]

Your friendly neighborhood SineWeaver,
JAG

[_-_Bumpin_-_]

Not bad.

I got my own hip hop studio, so I figured I might have some say in this biz. The track was okay. It needs some mixing. I think the shaker was the loudest part. The lil synth that starts in the begining was cool, a lil bit of funk.

The drums themselves were programmed nicely, has a good step to it. But then you kill em off in another breakdown. :\ Feels very latino there.

The bassline has a hustler feel to it, maybe a little bit of a beach vibe; not sure. The track as a whole seems incomplete. Maybe work on a focused hook part, I dunno. I think someone could do a decent song rapping over this.

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG