beatmasterJAG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[We've got this in the Bag!]

oooch-yaa

Aight dood. So in the begining I heard the first problemo. You have alot going on near the same frequency range in the mid lows. To clean the song up a bit adjust the synths covering the low end or mix them level wise with panning etc.\\

I don't think the song ever took off...work on that! But I did really like the computer bleeps in the middle there. This song is very repetitive. Cool outro tho.

Keep it wildstlye!
JAG

[Jarvid! Pooper Poof Game]

Its short :[

I dont use FL much, but are these a bunch of presets? I hope not. I must not be discouraging tho, so keep working at music and one day you may rock at it?!

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

Jarvid responds:

No they are not presets.

[Weekend Has Come]

DjEagle says, "Bounce my bishes!"

I deducted on the Originality b/c you mentioned it was a remix?!

Solid dance track though! I think the mixing could be improved a little bit; as I don't think that is entirely the fault of compression. Some of the drum work is cool with the rolls and crashes. Nice fun bright track tho!! :] Prolly get my girl and many others bouncing :D Ah me, classic crash ending-grats!

Keep it wildstyle!!
JAG

DjEagle responds:

Thanks alot man :)

[[TMM43]Hot [?]]

Good synth

The sound of the synth filters well, I like it. Work out the distortion and make this into a full track!!
Get a good mix and this one would be "hot"

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[Shall we]

Great Start!

I like the vocal sample in the begining. This sounds like a really active loop you have started! Now finish it!!!! You could make a really good peice out of this. As of now its just a loop. It might make a good couple second fighting loop for a flash submission, but I think you should finish it :)

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[[[=Ealif=]]]

Very Well Composed

This sounds very epic and emotional. I am going to have to download this. It will be tough pulling it apart to see what it is that actually strikes me about it! LOL It just looped back and its comically close to being a loop...not sure if that was intended! I love the guitar playing, it brings such realism to the song. It is always better when a human has actually played elements of the song, IMO. That way the music just feels all the more real, as if you can touch what is going on! I enjoyed the drums they were very well done, and ride the wave of this song. Great work here! Welp gotta split!

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[[[=Electrify REMIX=]]]

NIIICEE!!!

I am a HUGE hip hop fan. Some dont know that. I hate mainstream rap as of late cause it all sounds like tha same ol shit I wipe my ass with, but this is a hot rendition! You got my head knockin'! I love the filtered, building intro. The slow attack synth sounds great with the sharp attacking drums! This peice really moves around alot if you know what I am saying. I like the percussive break, and the cool delay on the ending vocals.

This is wildstyle!
JAG

[In The Name Of The Holocaust 2]

Very Different

Very different from what I normally listen to. But I will try to give you my best. This peice seems very estranged and dark. I salute you on your ability to play and the mere fact you got to play in front of an audience; something I have never personally accomplished. Tell me though, why did you choose this piece (if you had a choice) and what do you like about it?

I will go listen to some others to get a more broaden view of you musical tastes.

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

[Battlegrind]

Not to shabby///

I wonder why you dont get more traffic. Its a shame. The synths peaked the mix, if you improved the layer this would be a pretty good track. Cool breakdowns into the drum parts. And screaming lead towards the end I might add!

5/5 in hopes to get you more attention!

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

mechanoid-9 responds:

Thanks a lot, finally someone who votes too. I also wonder why my newer stuff don't get any reviews or score... Even though they get some dls. If I dl a song from anyone I automatically give it a 5. I dunno why others can't do that, it's just a click. People are getting lazy I guess.

[[TMM43]Peaceful]

Quite gripping for ambient!

The bass really jutted out, but I thought it was interesting in the begininng until it continued. This was also before I realized it was supposed to be an ambient track(I was expecting drums to kick in to reinforce the bass).

If it were turned down more I think that would be best. In doing that I believe the focus would be turned to the sweeping pads and the other elements that make up the "peaceful" side of this song. Otherwise it was not to bad ot entertain my ears to :]

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG