Score: 9

"You'll be back...alas...good luck!"

submission: Stargenx - Dream Mountain

date: December 6, 2009

Quite peaceful. I was having a total convo on msgr and was so in the zone listening to your track yet it was all happening with out me really realizing I was supposed to be listening to review. Plus the guy I was talking about was telling me about his gf breakup and it kinda fit with the music like sound score of some sort. Real nice ambiance, great lush pads, and the piano was well done. The sax is a nice touch as well. Nothing really negative on this one, nor can I give much for constructive criticism-sorry. Too bad you are leaving the site--they always seem to come back around sooner or later....

~JAG

Score: 7

"Innovative for a remix!?"

submission: Dimrain47 Every End (Remix)

date: December 6, 2009

The power lead that comes in close to 30 secs is crazy, it sounds like you have the attack slower - never tried that before for this type of song. Kind of a funny ending just droppin the tempo like that with a fade out. Interesting ideas hear -short track tho. Suppose I should go listen to the original now...

~JAG

Score: 9

"Solid."

submission: DJ Crystallize - Addiction

date: December 6, 2009

Hey there-second review-and I can see you have dance music skills. This one is a little more trancey than the hardstyle one I just heard. Really like the crazy lead at 1:40 didn't see that comin'. Not sure how professional this one really comes off as-BUT it is definately fun to listen to. Sorta like how you just splatter the snare drums at max on the fill. Transitions between the two distinct song parts are kinda awkward. Once again I think your tracks could be longer--all the elements are there. This one makes for a nice loop, tho.

d/l here!

~JAG

--Are there any recommendations on other tracks of yours that i should listen to?

Score: 8

"Nice work!"

submission: Dj Crystallize-Bad Stylez RMX

date: December 6, 2009

This track has all the classic elements of hardstyle. Gritty basslines and crunchy breaks. Classic rev up alarm sound. Thank god you finally came with the lead. I was waiting for it. Enjoyed the small breakdown almost solo-like bass part after the lead which could have progressed back into the lead part eventually. This track could be longer and detailed a little more to take it to the next and complete level!!

Keep it wildstyle!
~JAG

Score: 6

"All too loud-but all happy sounding"

submission: -NB- [Waters Incandescence]

date: December 6, 2009

Easy way to start fixing distortion-TURN DOWN your synths. All the synths are blasting thru the mix and drowning out the drums. Use compressors to squelch certain elements as desired. But definately start with just getting a good balance of levels.

~JAG

Score: 6

"A decentstart IMO"

submission: Perilous Morning

date: December 6, 2009

I like the delay on the lead but I think it drags on a little too much and could use a compressor to control the occasional loud spots. I think you are missing the drums. Although some songs are cool as pure instramentals so far the sequencing and lack of melodies could really use some percussion of any type.
Keep learning FL -good luck!

~JAG

Score: 6

"As I say, "Make those emotions music""

submission: Red ring

date: December 6, 2009

Its too bad your xbox died. Perhaps that is why the lead was looping and loud and maybe purposefully annoying? Not trying to be harsh...work on your melodies and adjust the levels of the mix. I like the breakdown at 2:22, thats a cool sound. Sorry about your XBOX tho; my bro buys and fixes broken xbox's and also does repairs for ppl-feel free to PM me for info.

Keep workin on music and learning.

~JAG

Score: 8

"Kachink-ink Reeeahhreeeeeeee"

submission: Tuneit - PrinterBass

date: December 6, 2009

Cool song...did you record the printer yourself? That is very cool if you did, good initiative. It is interesting that you created separate parts of the song with separate selections of the printer sample. Good edits on the cuts. Compared to some of the other songs out there somewhat prefer your attempt-due to the dry use of the printer sample. The only thing that would take this song to the next level is by adding more sample layers that tweak the printer samples. Get all glitchy and nasty with it.

d/l 5/5 - cuz we all need a helping hand.
~JAG

Score: 8

"Whip that WIP into Shit"

submission: Moar Dots! [DEMO]

date: December 4, 2009

Get a finished upload of this biz. Nice happy hardcore start here. I like the vocal sample just cuz the way the person says Fuck! lol

Fine tune and finish ti if you feel the motivation and worth.

Your friendly neighborhood Sineweaver,
JAG

Score: 6

"A Good Kinda "Pretty Lame"?! lol"

submission: -House just became gay-

date: December 4, 2009

Hmmm...not overly gay--but loud and annoying. I think I have heard worse shit...hmmm Clay Aiken?!

Good jocular attempt at making fun of bad electronic music tho.

~JAG